At this point the quarterback is frustrated but it's just one play so he shakes it off and gets ready for the next offensive possession.
The defense holds up yet again, there are 47 seconds left on the clock and the team is down by 5 points. The quarterback has had enough of his superstar receiver complaining but not producing when he does get thrown to. So the quarterback sends him deep as a decoy and he just throws to other players. The offense is looking well and they made it to all the way to their opponent's 4 yard line and have enough time for one game winning play. The superstar receiver begs his quarterback to throw it his way and promises he will go up and get it. Sadly the quarterback remembers the past two times he said that so he doesn't even look his way. Somehow on this particular play the superstar receiver is left wide open and since the quarterback never looked his way he had to force a bad pass to another player. It was too bad that the player he ended up throwing the ball to just happened to be on the other team. The one time the entire game the superstar receiver is left wide open is the one time that the quarterback should have been looking his way. But since the receiver was pretty much letting the other team intercept it the quarterback didn't trust him.
Authors Notes: My story is derived from the story of "The Boy Who Cried Wolf". I grew up playing sports and there always seems to be that person who thinks that the ball should always be in their hands. Usually when someone wants the ball they just yell ball and it's an unwritten rule that if someone yells for the ball it means they really want the ball and must be wide open. When you lazily pass them the ball thinking they'll be open, but quickly realize there's no reason they should even have the ball it makes you question their motives. So instead of the boy who cried wolf this is the boy who cried ball.
Bibliography: This story is based the the fable "The Boy Who Cried Wolf"
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I am starting to think you might like football. Just kidding, the story was well thought out and meant to correlate. You did a great job of showing us how to correlate the two seemingly different stories. We have all played sports with a ball hog, and don't appreciate it when their pride has pushed the team up against the wall when many times it can be the individual trying to achieve glory.
ReplyDeleteI loved your interpretation of the boy who cried wolf. I was so caught up in the story I was getting upset at the receiver, and felt bad for the quarterback at the end when the receiver was actually open. So good job at making the readers feel connected and intrigued to read more! I also liked your author’s note, it’s true there’s a ball hog on every team.
ReplyDeleteKalen, what an interesting story! I liked that you used your own interests (sports/football) and recreated a story based off of that. I'm sure that actually happens all too often in real life. Players can definitely get too cocky. One suggestion would be to maybe break up your paragraphs a little more. It might make it more dramatic if the climactic bad play was by itself. It would help make it a little easier read too. Great story!
ReplyDeleteHey Kalen! I thought this was a really interesting twist to "The Boy Who Cried Wolf!" It definitely shows how passionate you are about football because the story reflected it. There were definitely hints to "The Boy Who Cried Wolf" throughout the story but the Author's Notes is what actually confirmed it, so I thought you did a good job at keeping the stories different but still pretty related. Awesome story!
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